On camera
Two different failures with two different fixes. Reciting happens when the words arrive before the thought does: the face goes still, the voice flattens to one pitch, the hands stop, and the eyes drift slightly up and sideways hunting the next line. Everybody feels it. What they call it is “that’s an ad”.
Pick a real person before you hit record and say their name in your head. Not "people who might want to sell a house". One human being. Your neighbor. A past client. Your brother.
Everything downstream fixes itself. The volume drops to conversational, the pace loosens, your face starts doing the thing it does when you talk to somebody you like. "Hey, it's Chip" stops being an announcement and becomes a greeting, which is what it is.
The single biggest one. Do not start from stillness and ramp into energy. You will spend the first four seconds getting there, and the first two seconds are the entire hook.
Before you hit record: move. Roll your shoulders, shake your hands out, one breath in through your nose. Then start talking AT the energy you want to end at. It should feel like the clip caught you mid-thought, already going.
The script is what you mean, not what you must say. Read it once, look up, say it your way. If you change a word, the word was wrong.
You are the only source for how you talk. If a line does not fit in your mouth it is a bad line and it gets rewritten. The one exception is the numbers. Those come from the MLS and they go in exactly as written, or not at all.
Do not hold them still. Do not put them behind your back. Do not think about them at all.
If your hands are moving, you are thinking, and thinking is what reads as real. Chest-up framing lets them enter and leave naturally instead of being parked in shot.
Say the last word, then hold. Keep looking down the lens for one full second and let the expression stay on your face.
Do not trail off. Do not add "so, yeah". Do not smile-and-look-away, which is the most common tell that somebody is relieved it is over. That held second is the whole ending, and it gives a clean cut instead of a trim into your next breath.
Ninety seconds. Do not skip it. You would not walk on set cold.
The one thing to remember
Seven videos went out in the old format and got zero comments. Not one, on any of them, across three accounts and nine thousand followers.
Nothing was wrong with the writing or the footage. There was no person in them. That is the entire fix, and you are the entire fix. You do not need to be polished. You need to be recognisable.
Chip McAllister, Broker Associate · First Team Real Estate · DRE #01971252